Bellows burst open the careful seaming of my soul,
as I lift up my being to the Lord.
Wearing this offering best with abandon; if I
arrived clothed, soon I won’t be anymore.
Love rises from these faults and failures, like
the trembling chords of freedom’s first cry.
Your embrace unfolds all my secrets,
taking death to renew this child’s life.
Out loud, You shine through exalting’s stance;
in palms’ submitting, face’s illuminating,
eyes’ pouring out of your proof, while feet
dance in the rivers of Glory’s wading.
My tongue swells with praise, and these days
fade with moments of profound Presence.
With the salted wet pores which seep my wear, I
wipe away this playground’s dust from my senses,
leaving room for your restoration only.
Cleanse my spirit with angels’ harmony:
the blistering fire; the smoldering flame; the
gentle flicker… all the same, engulfing me.
The sound of your grace cannot be named;
the depth of your mercy to no phrasing belongs.
All I can offer in the surrender of my all –
the float of my voice upon the heart of my song.
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Wonderful! This is so amazing. You do spoken word?
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Thank you so much. I do on occasion. Groups come and go where I am, so there’s no consistent forum for open mics here. They never seem to get enough momentum to last very long, unfortunately.
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Its a pleasure to connect with you. You write so well for spoken word and I love your work. Where do you come from and can I use your work please? For spoken word? Then perhaps I can send you the videos?
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I am in California, north LA County. If you at least give me credit, I don’t mind. 🙂 I would love to have the videos… I can share them on my Facebook. Cool!
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Your full name please? You have whats app?
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Nicole Allen. Would you send via link or file? I have Dropbox, Yousendit, Facebook, email… whatever works. Just let me know.
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Yeah sure…we can do facebook and email
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Let us connect and know each other first. Whenever I perform I will send them to you
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I love it when a beautiful writing finds me at a moment I needed to read this…open to this. There are too many lines that speak to me…I kept nodding my head…rereading this poem…and your last line is the golden ribbon that ties it all together. ..written from the heart and felt by your readers.
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What a touching comment, Oliana. Thank you. I so appreciate your sharing and love the feedback. Blessings to you…
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This is amazing-strenth and tenacity ooze from off this page! Conitune to be a beacon…blessings!
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Thank you so much! You continue to be strong and diligent in your faith, as well. 🙂
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Awesome, as always. I like how each of us has picked a different favorite line. The one that spoke most to me was “All I can offer in the surrender of my all.”
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Thank you, Karuna. I love that different parts resonate with different people… like a kindred web of sorts. 🙂
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I finally finished my Take Me to Church post!
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Ooh… let me get logged in and settled at my desk and I’ll be right over to check it out! 🙂
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Nice written .Thank’s for sharing
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Thank you!
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Hi , Plz give a look
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You have expressed many thoughts so well. This is a beautiful poem, as are many of your poetry. I had considered writing about exaltation, but I couldn’t formulate a long prose so I wrote on something else more familiar to me.
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Well you know how I feel about your piece. Thank you… there just wasn’t a second thought for me. Worship is the most stirring aspect of my life – period! Like I told Karuna, I knew immediately what to write. I love this week’s prompt!
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“My tongue swells with praise, and these days fade with moments of profound Presence.” This line really speaks to me. The whole thing of course is great as usual, and overflows in the way that you feel your heart overflowing when filled with the Spirit.
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Thank you :). I’m glad it spoke to you.
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Wow!!! I love this… Deep!!!
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Thank you, God’s Child. 🙂
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Beautiful & inspirational. Your words speak of a steadfast resilience, and I admire that. Thanks for sharing, Nik
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I found this poem very beautiful & profound. I especially like the part about salt wet pores – this poem speaks of a steadfast resilience, and that inspires me. Thank you so much for sharing 🙂
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You are gracious. Thank you for your comment. Yes, resilience is necessary in this life. I am quite glad to inspire it. 🙂
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So beautifully written and expressed. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you, Jacob. I admire your work, as well.
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