Here I stand
in the recesses of self-worth,
quantifying the number of deaths it took
to reach this birth.
Hello,
my name is This Hurts,
and I’m a recovering Lover of Less Than.
Always been a fan of mysterious man,
maybe because father was a late bloomer.
From the rumor mill to the toxic pill,
to the “something about his eyes
makes my breath stand still”…
Whatever “it” has been to draw me
beneath his will – was ever just enough.
Just enough to
strip these layers to the buff.
Hidden worlds within my bosom
ran amuck, starved for a taste of love.
Wading trenches drenched in mud,
losing ground every time…
Grasping hope to rise above,
falling deeper down the line…
Never a blind eye, just
a heart asking why, making room
for shifting skies.
But clouds give shade, then
regurgitate rain over fresh tears,
drowning optimism in its own fears.
No part compensates for the whole;
foolishness plucks the single yellow rose,
expecting the thorns not to
bleed their nature.
This nomenclature of “half-full”
runs its course and leaves one empty.
I’ve spent years in recovery;
the first step, that is.
Perched in this corner,
nothing more’s required; if only,
love would just retire.
I could free my soul to play, but
Vice’s reach is a pinch away and
I must survive its touch.
Lovers of Less Than lose too much,
so I will stay behind these
cautious eyes and pray
I somehow recognize
when More Than comes my way.
In response to Dungeon Prompt, “I Am A Recovering (fill in the blank)” http://theseekersdungeon.com/2015/04/09/dungeon-prompts-i-am-a-recovering-fill-in-the-blank/.
Aloha Dear Soul, blessings on your quest for the truth when it comes to Love…Come visit my blog when you have a chance & see what I have discovered. Sending You More, Shivalaya
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Aloha! Thank you, Shivalaya. I will certainly visit your blog.
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Aloha to you, too~I hope you will find spiritual nourishment in my experiences~
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wonderfully worded. a thing of soulful beauty. keep up the good work. visit my press if you can spare some moments. 🙂
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Thank you, Resurgence. 🙂 I most certainly will!
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Thank you:) and your poems have officially impressed and inspired me 🙂
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Yay
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This is beautiful. I like it.
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Thank you!
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Amazing, amazing, amazing!!
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Thank you so much!
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Great stuff you got here… I liked it 🙂
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Thank you, Mat! 🙂
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You’re welcome…
I’m a budding poet myself. I found your quite intriguing 🙂
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BTW, Hope you could swing by my blog page too.. Love to hear your thoughts 🙂 Cheers..!
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Absolutely! I’ve been working my way through everyone who has followed and visited my blog. That fresh press brought a few hundred people my way, so… whew! But you’re in front of me now… heading your way… 🙂
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Aww… BIG thanks to you..! Much Appreciated 🙂 Have a wonderful day ahead..
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You too!
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Deep, moving, relatable!
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Thank you, mbulanzuki!
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Anytime lady!
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Never settle for less.. such a beautiful post. Very well written! I created a new blog last month called Real Life Natural Wife. I really enjoyed your blog. I hope you’ll come check it out and leave me a comment with your thoughts! Congrats on being freshly pressed! Have a great day!
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Hi Crissy Dean. It’s a pleasure to meet you. Thank you so much for your thoughts. I will certainly visit your blog as well. As you can imagine, it’s taken me some time to check out all my recent followers. This freshly pressed thing is no joke! 🙂 Read you soon…
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Thanks for your Likes too..! xx
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I believe there are so many of us that are there or have been there… fabulously written!
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Thank you!
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intriguing
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I believe you are the first to call my work intriguing. Thank you 🙂
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Welcome
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This is beautiful, intricate yet polite.
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Thank you, venusthetaurian. 🙂
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very beautiful
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Thank you 🙂
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you are welcome
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More Than…
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Lovely words.. Beautifully written..
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Always i like more than
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Apoetic ur full name
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It’s my “name” for this site.
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Exceptional. Loved your poetry although i am not into poetry but I know Poetry can be a person’s best friend if he falls and grows for it. Keep up the good work mam. 🙂
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Thank you, Yash. I’m glad you were able to glean something from my writing, especially since it really isn’t your type of thing. 😀
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This is truly a work of art.. I love feeling the passion in this!
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Thank you so much KinleyRea. I’m glad it has moved you.
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That was wonderful! Especially loved ‘making room for shifting skies’
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That’s what compromising hearts do… Thank you, Chasinghe (cool alias, by tha way).
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Reblogged this on madisonroseanne and commented:
This is wonderful; something that I can relate to on a certain level. Thank you for publishing!
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Thank you for sharing! I appreciate it and am glad you enjoyed this piece.
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Awesome read! Fresh!
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Yay! Thanks, Ting! 🙂
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Wow..! Very nice writing! I’m impressed as well as inspired.
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Well, then, it’s a win-win! I love to impress and inspire. 🙂 Thanks so much, Arnav.
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আমি এসে গেছি
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I don’t know the translation, but thank you!
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Beautiful poetry!!!! *claps* 🙂
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Bow… bow… 🙂 Thank you!
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I love your blog
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Aww, thank you so much. That means a lot to me.
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A nyc one….amazing
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Thank you 🙂
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The word is ‘Wow’. 🙂
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Thank you Abhimanyu! 😀
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Me too girl, me too.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Miss Reject Reality!
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This is fantastic; really inspiring and beautifully written.
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Thank you so much, Wordsofpersuasion.
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Thank you! Your words are potent medicine as we all search for ways to fill our needs and desires without compromising our integrity with ourselves. Much respect for your sharing!
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Thank you, Farm Girl! I value your feedback and find joy in knowing my work has a positive effect on others.
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Thank you, I’m honored. 🙂
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Nice!
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Thank you, Jujitsugirl!
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you’re welcome 🙂
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I wish I could write like that!
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You are so kind. Thank you, Mirrorgirl!
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Nice piece.
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Thanks, Environ Solutions.
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Wow.
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Thank you, Shel Shokk. 😀
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Beautiful throughout, from the first line to the last. Congratulations on being Freshly Pressed!
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Thank you so much! I’m not even sure what it means to be Freshly Pressed, but it sounds like a good thing. 🙂
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Well, the long and short of it is: you’ll be having a LOT of visitors these upcoming days 🙂 Enjoy the attention – you deserve it!
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I quickly deduced that, as the influx has already begun. How awesome of you. Thanks!
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Oh my whoa! You created a monster… Lol I was finally able to look at all the likes and comments and follows after work today. It’s just incredible. Thanks again for blessing me with this surprise. You’ve made my heart smile. 😀
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This really spoke to me – having both settled for Less Than and rearranged myself to do so. The “something about his eyes” was especially powerful here too. Beautifully written and painfully honest.
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Thanks so much. Yes… you see now why I connected so well with your piece.
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Oh yes. Definitely. 🙂
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Wow, amazing. Do you just flow like that or do you have to work at it? It sounds effortless but is so intricately weaved. Loved it.
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Awesome! Thanks!!! Usually the first 3/4 flows easy, but I have to play with the end to get the right feel/impact. Or the end comes to me & I need to tweak the lead in. I make a few word changes when I transfer from pad to post & recite aloud for rhythm. 🙂 It’s actually an easier process responding to your prompts than my own notions.
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Took me an hour… saw your prompt with one eye half awake and couldn’t go back to sleep. Had to fumble for the notepad… Lol
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